Morgan dragon sketch commission...

Hey,
I was curious if this is an alright initial sketch, I can scrunch up face I it looks weird, not used to making short faces...
Also the other details will be doodled in soon, but was curious if pose and facial expression sketch was alright.
hoppe it works out fine in the end

Edit: Edited face tell me if it is better...I think it looks a lot better than my first attempt...
Edit 2 : Made a few more line clean ups but also made a paw change. other than that clean up is taking its sweet time really... >:/